On the beach, on the coast,
Under the idle, whispering coconut towers,
Before the growling, foaming, waves,
I met a thief, who guessed I had
An innocent heart for her to steal.
She took my hand and led me under
The intimate cashew boughs which shaded
The downy grass and peeping weeds.
She jumped and plucked the nuts for me to suck;
She sang and laughed and pressed close.
I gazed: her hair was like the wool of a mountain sheep
Her eyes, a pair of brown-black beans floating in milk.
Juicy and round as plantain shoots
Her legs, arms and neck;
And like wine-gourds her pillowy breasts;
Her throat uttered fresh banana juice:
Matching her face — smooth and banana-ripe.
I touched — but long before I even tasted,
My heart had flowed from me into her breast;
And then she went — High and South —
And left my carcase roasting in the fire she'd lit.
Austin S. Bukenya (born 1944) Uganda
Source: Poems from East Africa, selected by David Cook and David Rubadiri, East African Publishers, 1996
One of the best poems I've interacted with. It carried my imagination towards the beach, under the cashew boughs and peeping green grass. And I got lost in it! I roused myself up just in time to realise it was a dirty, misleading reverie.
ReplyDeleteThe best!
ReplyDeleteAlways sweet!
ReplyDeleteWell crafted
ReplyDeleteA bit interesting 🤔
DeleteLoved the choice of words.
ReplyDeleteGreat poem
ReplyDeleteThe first poem I read at the university
ReplyDeleteBruce, thanks. This is a good collection. See my poems too at: https://ugandabeinsanfrancisco.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteThanks Tom - I will certainly check out your blog and post one or more of your poems here (assuming that's OK?)
DeleteIt is okay.
DeleteSomeone to identify the styles used here
ReplyDeleteHi. I'm not an expert, but here's what I would say about the poem's style:
ReplyDelete1. It's in blank verse (i.e. doesn't rhyme)
2. The third stanza uses a lot of nature metaphor to describe the woman, this is similar to Song of Solomon in the Bible, but also a lot of classic African poetry uses nature symbolism
3. It uses contrasting juxtaposition quite a lot, e.g. " idle, whispering" versus "growling, foaming" in stanza 1 and in the final stanza his [living] heart is transformed into his [dead] carcase
4. Overall the imagery used is very visceral and vivid - you can almost feel and see the things he's describing
I hope that helps
You characterized it so well. It helps.
DeleteThe first question came to my mind is that:
ReplyDeleteWho is a thief being talked about?
Finally, I recognized that it was a woman whom the poet felt in love with.unfortunately, she went away and left him alone.
Impressive and very creative., wonderful choice of words.
ReplyDeleteThis swt piece explains how swt falling in love is
ReplyDeleteYes it is a nice piece
ReplyDeleteSo much interesting
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely poem, certainly among my favourites
ReplyDeleteSuch a beautiful poem
ReplyDeleteI like the artistic quality in this poem
ReplyDeleteOf what race is the persona?
ReplyDeleteIf you are asking about the poet himself, you can find out more here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Austin_Bukenya
DeleteIf you're asking about the people in the poem, then for me the story it tells is eternal and the race of the two people is not really relevant. Hence the woman is only described as having curly hair (like a sheep's) and dark brown eyes (like beans floating in milk). I suppose you could say they are African because the poet is African (from Uganda); but does it really mater?
Am in high school doing these questions about the poem...someone please help
ReplyDelete1.What is the relevance of the title of the poem?
2. What is the race of the thief according to the poem?
I assume these are questions you have been set to think about for yourself, so I won't answer them directly, but I'll give you some pointers that hopefully will help you :)
Delete1. What is the relevance of the title of the poem?
The thing to think about here is what is meant by “a thief” – who or what is the thief, why are they a thief, what did they steal?
The clue to the thief are the lines “who guessed I had / An innocent heart for her to steal” and “she went — High and South — / And left my carcase roasting in the fire she'd lit” – what is the thief stealing?
2. What is the race of the thief according to the poem?
There are two main clues to her race: “her hair was like the wool of a mountain sheep” and “Her eyes, a pair of brown-black beans floating in milk” – this tells us she has curly hair and dark brown eyes. Another less direct clue is the setting: clearly this is a tropical beach because of the plantains and coconuts.
Good luck with your analysis.
Thank you.
Delete1 What is the subject matter of the poem?
ReplyDelete2 Comment on the setting of the poem
3 Identify the images and their effectiveness to the poem
There are a lot of questions that have been asked about this poem so I guess it's a standard text at school or college! For this reason I will not give direct answers to your questions because then you are not doing the thinking, and my guess is that this is what you are supposed to do :)
DeleteSo I hope this is helpful:
1. In stanza 1: "I met a thief, who guessed I had / An innocent heart for her to steal" - what is the thief stealing? In stanza 2, what happens? In stanza 4: "I touched — but long before I even tasted, / My heart had flowed from me into her breast" - what is his reaction? And finally "And then she went ... / And left my carcase roasting in the fire she'd lit." - what is the outcome?
If you can answer these questions, a small "story" will be revealed, and this type of story is one that has a general descriptive name (for example one might call a story about pirates and treasure maps "an adventure", or a story about a person who's love has been spurned "unrequited love".)
2. The setting is very vividly described - you should be able to pick it out from the many descriptions, such as the very first line. Also see my comment on question 3 below.
3. I'll give one example and leave you to pick out the others! "Under the idle, whispering coconut towers, / Before the growling, foaming, waves,"
The imagery here engages three senses: visual (coconut TOWERS, FOAMING waves); auditory (whispering coconuts, growling waves); then you have the word IDLE which both describes the movement (i.e. not much, so the wind can't have been very strong - hence the sense of touch as you feel the wind). Also there's the emotional feeling (i.e. idleness as in not doing anything very much). Overall the mixture is very effective because several senses are involved to bring the image to life: you can see, hear and feel the scene: the light (idle) wind, the gently waving, whispering coconut palms and the sound of waves "growling" on the beach, and also get a glimpse of the poet's state of mind at the start (idle).
I hope that helps. Good luck with your assignment.
My favorite poem 😍
ReplyDeleteA great poem indeed.
ReplyDeleteMy best poem in all
ReplyDeleteAm in ferocious love with it indeed...
Identify the speaker
ReplyDeleteWhat a nice poem!!Though toi may help me with some question
ReplyDeletea.Poetry is universal and natural.How is it represented in this poem?
b.Poetry is spontaneous overflow of emotions.How is it represented in this poem?
What is the theme of the poem
ReplyDeleteIt's among the best poems .I love it
ReplyDeleteThis is a love poem though it seems that it finally went sour to the speaker.
ReplyDeleteWhat is the tone, mood and attitude of the poem
ReplyDeleteWhat comes into your mind when you read each stanza
DeleteTrue
DeleteI love the poem
ReplyDeleteMetaphor?
ReplyDeleteWhat is the relevance of the title?
ReplyDeleteSee my reply to Anonymous May 2020 above
DeleteHow does setting and persona leads to a Central meaning of the poem?
ReplyDeleteWho is the persona
ReplyDeleteWho is the persona in this poem
ReplyDeleteLiked the metaphors used to describe her. And the whole word play was a good choice too. Thumbs up
ReplyDeleteCan out plz make a summary for me for this poem
ReplyDelete"I even tasted" what is the meaning?
ReplyDelete"And then she went — High and South"
ReplyDeleteWhat is the meaning?
Soooooooh sweet that I have fallen in love with.
ReplyDeleteI love the poem😍
ReplyDeleteA good one
ReplyDeleteWhat about the thematic concerns
ReplyDeleteWhat are the function of literature in this poem
ReplyDeleteI like this poem
ReplyDeleteWow great piece😊
ReplyDeleteThe best
ReplyDeleteImpressive
ReplyDeleteHelp me please to understand the form and content of this poem"I met a thief by bukenya
ReplyDeleteBoom
ReplyDeleteMeaning of thief in the poem
ReplyDeleteWhat a good piece!!!
ReplyDeletegreatest poem,I like it
ReplyDeleteCan you identify one economic activity portrayed in the poem
ReplyDeleteHelp me with this
ReplyDelete1. What is the message in the poem
2. Discuss the theme in the poem
3. Explain the title of the poem
4. Comment about the poetic devices used in the poem
A nice poem good choice of words very captivating
ReplyDeleteVery interesting....it makes me remember old high sch good days...it made me love poetry
ReplyDeleteInteresting piece of art
ReplyDeleteWhat is the mood , tone ,and attitude of this poem
ReplyDeleteWhat's the subject matter plz tell me gyz
ReplyDeleteA master piece of a poem
ReplyDeleteConnotation
ReplyDeleteAnswers of this poem
ReplyDeleteWhat are the character traits of the persona and the theif
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